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In Your Arms
Contributed by
shanarah
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:22:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deposit me into your arms
brush your lips with mine
sweet words you impart
deliver a passionate craving
combining our faith as one
scattering our love through eternity
watch the radiance flutter
for moments become memories
Permit me into your arms
where time seems motionless
Copyright ©
shanarah
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2004-09-14 08:22:34]
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Re: In Your Arms
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:32:40 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: In Your Arms
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:53:56 PM AEST
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Your words left such an impact amazing poem loved every word
Love Sweetangelukxxx |
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Re: In Your Arms
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:09:17 AM AEST
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Again, i'm impressed with how impactful you can be with only a few lines. I found this to be a serenly beautiful piece, through and through. Excellent job.
Featured guest at a human sacrifice festival,
-V.S. |
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