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i hurt you this time

Contributed by blackholesun on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:54:08 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

im sorry i hurt you but my feelings are real,
now you see how you make me feel,
i didnt want to show you this way,
but you dont listen to what i say,
i had to tell you some way,
im sorry i hurt you but i wanted you to know,
how i feel when you get up and go,

you got mad because i took a walk with another guy,
at the moment he listened to me cry,
i felt so bad,
these feelings i needed to get out,
i cant tell you,you scream and shout
a stranger told me i was a *****,
i wish i was dead lying in a ditch,
i can change the way i cry
i can change the way i act,
i can change the way i sound,
i cant change the pain inside that just wont die,
i feel so weak can i cry?
i throw myself to the ground at your feet,
i cant live without you,my love pete.

i can change the way i look,
i can change the way i act,
but i cant change how i feel,

i cant change my emotions they are real.

Copyright © blackholesun ... [ 2004-09-14 07:54:08]
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Re: i hurt you this time (User Rating: 1 )
by jonbalser on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:35:12 AM AEST
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i really like this poem, not just because for once a women is admitting her mistake, but having the so called balls to do it on a poem for everyone to see. I only wish i knew a girl that would open up to me, like you have done here,
jon balser

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