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The Quiet of Distant Shores
Contributed by
neveryours
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:24:19 AM in AEST
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Do not think me unkind, for this
Our simple exchange cannot bear
The distance that excludes a kiss
Where lips should meet, is only air.
The space between our outstretched hands
Defies their effort to embrace
The contrast that is both our lands
Makes distance often more than space.
The thunderous roar of water spray
Upon your shore is deafening
How quickly it will wash away
The matter of our chance meeting
I feel –my heart is strong and sure
Yet ears are deaf to waterfall
So while I love you sweet and pure
It doesn’t matter here at all.
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2004-09-14 07:24:19]
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Re: The Quiet of Distant Shores
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:15:33 PM AEST
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Fabulous what a lovely read
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Re: The Quiet of Distant Shores
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by Merry on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 06:30:53 PM AEST
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This title caught my eye - as I think almost eveyone I know has written something about-distant shores - so it is always interesting to see variations on this theme - you have captured the feelings well - gentlly letting go - nice work.
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