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Exhale
Contributed by
shepdog1972
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Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Under the soft ocean of silk that hides me
beneath the leaves of the trees that shelter me
im looking over the edge of eternity
and finally seeing the rocks of reality
now that the crossroads of life have passed me by
the same things that made me laugh make me cry
i found the flaw that made the fake
said goodbye to decadence...that was yesterday
so when your dieing for tommorow
instead of living for today
your only living for tommorow and dieing feels the same
Breath a bit of life into me exhale the wind of your wicked ways
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2002-11-08 03:00:00]
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Re: Exhale
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 06:58:54 AM AEST
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Great poem, Shepdog!! Love it..
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Re: Exhale
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:11:23 AM AEST
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This gave me goosebumps
at the end where it says Breath
a bit of life into me exhale the wind
of your wicked ways. Absolutely
beautiful write, i enjoyed this
alot. Keep em' coming shep
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Exhale
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by cryingonmyporch on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 01:42:41 PM AEST
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For once I can say that I'm speachless!
Beautiful! |
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