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The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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inoc
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:31:09 AM in AEST
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hand in hand we walked awhile
he suddenly stopped me and I gazed into that smile
his beautiful eyes were blue as the sea
and his spunky face was what I loved to see
the lines on his skin was a handsome trademark
those thick long lashes made me spark
feeling his touch of my finger he kissed
the sensation it bought oh I couldn't have resisted
I felt something slide along my warm finger
he whispered my name and asked me to linger
forever together like two peas in a pod
with that awsome moment all I did was nod!
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:27:29 AM AEST
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Aww how sweet.......
such beauty in your words..well done |
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:24:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful and joyful, Hope all your days are like that one defining moment.
Hope both your futres are as beautiful as this poem is.
~Silence~ |
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:42:16 AM AEST
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| just beautiful, as usual |
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 11:11:58 AM AEST
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I was proposed to with a cigar band after dinner. The next day we went and chose the rings. This is so sweet. I love the sweetness of it. You know when it is love, for sure.
Rita |
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by Heartfilledblood on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:16:42 PM AEST
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Beautiful. Simply amazing. This poem is so sweet and very well written. I loved it so much. Amazing write keep up the great work.
Heartfilledblood |
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:35:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.... all the best forever...
Jenni |
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Re: The Nod That Made Me Mrs...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 09:48:00 AM AEST
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...WOW....
breathtaking work. I can almost picture it, and I can definitely feel it. |
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