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Date Rape On Ward Eleven
Contributed by
Mr_Jeremy
on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:57:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Roses scatter petals down the corridors of my soul,
Their whitened pallor sickens me in sanity's parole,
These drugs,
These drugs you give me, all they do is make me ill,
My god, I hear these footsteps, and I know they step to kill!
Smell of paint, imprisoning me within quadrant space,
Trace my cross of salvation within your dire embrace!
My spine!
My spine, it curls and snaps - your decompression's Bends
I slip and slide around this room, where twisting knob portends
Endless needles, pointing at me from your orifice
The slits of eyes so yellowing, desiring sacrifice,
My heart,
My heart it skips a skipping beat and laughs a beaten quip
As 'twixt my unlocked doorway you vehemantly do slip -
Menace, malice, ugliness - each one a hybrid whore
Of heinous help and homely hoarseness, veg'tables adore . . .
My nurse,
My nurse, come not with alms or thickened strong-boned arm,
For in o'er precipice of care, I'd fall from and have harm.
From thousand swirling effigies of scraping blackboard nails
Into your killing trust I sway, with mind as black entrails . . .
Cold, hard floors. Tiles and doors with metals of the slamming kind.
Crack my head on blackboard bed, and let your horror stab my mind . . .
Blink the sun.
Find the shade.
My tree is gone.
And you invade.
Copyright ©
Mr_Jeremy
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2004-09-14 05:57:31]
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Re: Date Rape On Ward Eleven
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:30:19 AM AEST
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Wow that's deep.........
I can feel your write and it's so freightening and sad..well done |
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Re: Date Rape On Ward Eleven
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:53:04 AM AEST
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caught my attention from beginning to end very good flow well written
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Re: Date Rape On Ward Eleven
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by Alina on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:32:57 PM AEST
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I'm speechless !! This was MAGNIFICANT !! This poem seems somewhat metaphorical yet based on a real experience. I've been locked up before in a rehab........three years when I was only 14......and placed on suicide watch in a hospital.....this poem describes those feelings I had. But that was in the past. Good Write.
ALINA |
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