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im freaking out
Contributed by
kritic_killer
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 05:16:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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im freaking out, really trippin now
cant stop my head from swimming, its a different feeling
not painful, not soothing
i am just numb. i am not sure if im sad or having fun.
its not a high its not a low
dont ask because i dont know
im not drunk and im not stoned,
its just a feeling that has grown.
im livid... but totally with it...
im aware of my surroundings
yet i am so dizzy.
ive felt like this since i met you
what is it that you do?
you make me feel everything
all feelings at one time
i guarantee you will be mine
i want you to say yes
make me know what im feeling
i need you to make it real.
make me understand me.
i need you in my life, stay by my side.
feel me in your heart from the very start.
happiness youll find if you say youll be mine
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2004-09-14 05:16:01]
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Re: im freaking out
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by jonbalser on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:46:08 AM AEST
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i really like this poem, i can really relate to it, sometimes i find myself feeling in a way that you were. Its the greatiest feeling of all
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Re: im freaking out
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by mylastwords on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:42:30 PM AEST
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i used 2 feel like that...until he broke my heart...i hope it all works out for you...
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: im freaking out
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:51:38 AM AEST
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hey good stuff here!
i like your use of rhyming here. |
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