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The Need Needle

Contributed by Exodus-On-Life on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:15:35 AM in AEST
Topic: insomniac



Needle through the outer
And needle through the skin
You pulled the pain from beneath me
And I tasted bliss again

Flesh that splits between us
A scar that time will never heal
The crazy feeling of insomnia
And insomnia is what crazy thing I feel

My eyes tear at the thought of
The everlasting pain
It's the fear that drives us through you
And it's the addiction that brings me back again

Poor little helpfuls
And the doubt that spread across my head
The needle woke me up from sleeping
And through the flesh the needle was fed

A rush of blood to the prospect
Our darkness will never ever fail
It's idea is tossed out in the open
An answer yes and darkness will prevail

So toss it through the outer
Show us the needle's will be done
Crazy and skeptical were they
Insomnia has never been this fun

It's a beauty that grows among us
Context lost in a pretentious way
Lose control of your motives
Tossed through the outer yesterday

Go back in to where you found me
Show me where I should try and begin
You push me even further
And you still push, push, push the pin

So pins and needles darling
Pins and needles we will
I'm stuck on a bed of doubtfuls
And I split the outer even still




Copyright © Exodus-On-Life ... [ 2004-09-14 02:15:35]
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Re: The Need Needle (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:35:50 AM AEST
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Insomnialy creative writing.
Insomnia is where I discovered poetry and writing.
Very good work.
luv, huggs, insomnia,
emy


Re: The Need Needle (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:05:47 AM AEST
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it's 1:21 am here..not getting piercings but I'm wide awake...good stuff.




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