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HISTORY
Contributed by
Angelochek
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Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:42:59 AM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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My name is History.
Unknown, forgat, but true.
Some people wish they knew me
But some are way to cruel.
Some hope they could return me
Some hope they could forget
Some hope they never knew me
Some wish for all of me back.
But, I am History
And, I am gone forever.
Some things I wish
Some people never did.
But who am I to tell
What people could put in me
I"m just a little big thing
I hope they won"t regret.
There goes a day
That will be mine tomorrow
All that I ask
Is that you"ll live it right.
So couple years from now
You"ll look at me and smile
Saying that History is best
When lived with God.
Copyright ©
Angelochek
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2004-09-14 00:42:59] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: HISTORY
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:55:34 AM AEST (User
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A masterpeice and great tribute to history.
Great writing!
luv huggs, smiles,
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Re: HISTORY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:53:39 AM AEST (User
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"Saying that History is best
When lived with God."
Heinous acts of propaganda have been perpetrated by those in God's name to change history into, what is effectively a tapestry of facts and lies. I assume you mean to live by God's word . . .
Some salient points. Well constructed, but missed the crux of history for my liking.
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Re: HISTORY
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sinned on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 07:53:08 PM AEST (User
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History
A nice projection,but I kinda wished you would have ended.
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After all isn't it---HIS-STORY
Good job
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