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Decorative Destruction
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:44:58 PM in AEST
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These hands of automoton
Work their way thru the dischord.
Happily plucking the sour notes of life.
Bows ignite in a roson induced flame,
And the trumpets scream for mercy.
The whispering of flutes
is the only peace amidst the ruptured orchestra.
hurriedly they exit,
As everything cresendos,
and collapses.
Brass devulges into bedlam,
And percussion turns to anarchy.
Auditory destruction,
Taken down only by the lights.
Softly the ink floats its way over,
And rests upon the hammer.
Tickling the ear into emotion,
Until the emotions are tangible and decadent.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
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2004-09-13 22:44:58]
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:00:38 AM AEST
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Hmmm
Dane i don't really get this poem .
Can you explain? please.
It sound good but i don't understand it. |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:40:35 PM AEST
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If you have to ask...
I get your poetry, you just have to go with it.
You're very creative, and that's cool.
Groovy.
--Mothy |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:48:48 PM AEST
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This is great bro! Great!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:26:21 PM AEST
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| interesting.... is it a commentary on how music is put together? It is very creative |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 06:55:40 PM AEST
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| Dane man this was really cool...It expanded my vocabulary, though I still don't know what bedlam is...Any way pretty awesome...Mason |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by xafflictedx on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 09:33:11 PM AEST
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| I don't know where it came from either but it's great. I think the line about percussion turns to anarchy might hint towards your punk brother. Is this true?? |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 06:11:09 PM AEST
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I don't see the point in analyzing poetry and trying to figure out
the hidden meanings behind the words. That's why I
always hated poetry in high school. Analyzing the crap out of it.
Dissecting it until it's reeks of something less than what it started
out being.
Dane, this poem should be read and taken for what it is.
Pure, unadulterated brilliance.
I like the way you think.
Peace!
~Breezy |
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Re: Decorative Destruction
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 01:14:53 PM AEST
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Nice job tapping into the ol' creative here. I like the metaphors. A symphony of discontent. Great finish!
~Scorp |
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