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I Won't Be Broken
Contributed by
iluvpencils
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:38:49 PM in AEST
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You mean nothing to me
See me walk away
I won't let you hurt me
Won't let you smother me
I'll walk away
I don't need your help
Your second hand sympathy
I refuse to be torn apart
So I'll walk away
I close my eyes
Turn my back
Breathe deep
You mean nothing to me
I refuse to be buried
I won't let you corrupt me
I walk away
Turn my back in defiance
I won't accept your
Truthless answers
Empty lies
Watch me as I walk away
I won't be torn apart
I refuse to stay
You mean nothing to me
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iluvpencils
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Re: I Won't Be Broken
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:12:07 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, I can see what you are trying to say, which is good, You show true emotion and I can feel them within the words.
So excellently written.
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Re: I Won't Be Broken
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:18:01 AM AEST
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A masterpeice that's very powerfull, positive and the kind of writes we need more of as so many put up with abuse cause they can't find courage to waik away!
Hit song and very powerfully full of positivity and luv for your own self.
Brava!
luv, huggs,
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Re: I Won't Be Broken
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by jonbalser on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 08:54:38 AM AEST
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sometimes times in life you have to take a chance and not always follow your feelings, people do change, some for better or some for worse, but like is about taking chances, and love is the most powerful thing, and if you have the chance to be in love and that someone love you back the same, then its worth the chance, but i don't know your situation so i hope i havn't offened you in anyway, it was a great poem tho,
jon |
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