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Lived in Vain
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:12:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lived in Vain
Tomorrow, the wasted opportunity
Today, the lifeless moment
Yesterday, forgotten unnecessarily
Until we can't live in the present
Yesterday is never thrown away
Because we keep going back to it
Every new day lived in vain
Taken for granted repeatedly
Tomorrow isn't there entirely
The cracks slowly open up
To devour the day before
Tomorrow depends on today
Don't take today in vain
It's not just another day
Time slips away
Today is a new beginning
To everything
Yesterday slipped away unnoticed
To begin today
High hopes and high dreams
All for nothing, yet survival
In the world we live in
Opportunities never used
Lifeless as it may seem
To live only in memories
Day after day of uselessness
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:17:35 AM AEST
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Days dawn in yesterdays past,
As I see sometimes, time flies then the day is gone, With nothing but a memory of it.
Very well written, and with a story and message within each word.
It was a beautiful read and I am glad I did, to such talent at play.
Thanks for sharing and allowing me to enjoy such poetry.
~Silence~ |
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:11:30 AM AEST
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| beautifully written as usual |
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:22:35 PM AEST
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Beautifully written .....some days feel like groundhog day great poem.
Love Sweetangelukxxxx
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:07:58 PM AEST
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| wise words... beautifully written * |
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by monophobic on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:22:23 PM AEST
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| you're poem truly inspired me!!! great job |
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:28:13 PM AEST
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| mmmmm profound.....lifeless as it may seem.....to live only in memories......day after day of uselessness....wow....that floors me.....well truth has that way......very creative profound work here...... |
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Re: Lived in Vain
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 04:06:14 PM AEST
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| What an interesting write. Excellent work. Keep penning. *S* Cynthia |
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