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Scream To The World
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:29:32 PM in AEST
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You, fading like a bad dream
Woken with a kiss
That seemed like you meant it
Thats why we call it "Bliss"
So I'll give you a single black rose
To express my dying love
And I would peel away a petal
For every person who said we were perfect
You would be left with the stem
Thorns and all; the equivalent of your soul
Which I would steal from you
And throw it on the ground
While screaming to the world
I'LL ALWAYS LOVE HER
As they laugh in my face
And kick me to the ground
I would sprinkle the rose petals
over my body; and sleep in disgrace
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Re: Scream To The World
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by monophobic on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:49:24 PM AEST
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| i wish my ex had cared at least half this much when we broke up. i think this is a great poem and u did a good job with making me see the emotion |
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Re: Scream To The World
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:52:39 PM AEST
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| i would not laugh at that it was full of emtion i can relate. we weren't actually a couple but we almost loved eachother then he hurt me. today i took him back again for the 4th time, when you love someone it seems as if you always wil until somehting better comes along.........you can e-mail me or w/e if you would like to talk not much i can help with but it's always good to know your not alone |
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Re: Scream To The World
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:12:07 PM AEST
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| Mason this was outstanding, you are the very essence of a poet. i am glad to see you too have been touched by the muse!!! this was amazing and i can't wait to read more. |
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Re: Scream To The World
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:31:42 AM AEST
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I see beauty within the poem, Sorrow bleeds from every word, Angers seed is there, a splintered heart crys a broken balad.......What I dont see is anything to laugh at in this poem!
Beautifully written and well worth the read.
~Silence~ |
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Re: Scream To The World
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:45:56 PM AEST
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I'm sorry for the breakup and I'm sorry you both left with a heavy heart. But with every down pour comes a rainbow.
something like that... |
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Re: Scream To The World
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 09:24:29 PM AEST
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My dearest friend Mason, this is an enchanting, yet morbid first write! It struck a chord, my friend! I know how you feel... Me and my bf broke up on June 23rd... Oh well, over it and unto new flesh! You will always have her in your memories and heart, but you must forget her if it gives you pain thinking about the past... Believe me, I know it is hard to forget, but you move on, and the past shall stay in the past, not be aprat of the present... Good luck with this anguish, Mason! May your days be filled with happiness, and may you find the love you deserve! Many smiles going your way! You can talk to me about it if you wish... Forever your friend,
Fleur de sang (Stephy) |
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Re: Scream To The World
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by theMoth on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 03:42:30 PM AEST
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Very impressive first submission.
Amazing how broken hearts
have made so many of us
poets.
--Mothy |
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