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pondering on misty windows
Contributed by
Rae
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:21:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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birds fly away from me,
it's a constant thing.
they wanted me all in black,
i do that everyday;
still, they never stop by.
you pass me by and
make me feel loved.
but i offer you more
than what you see.
think.
shaking hands
under dim orange lights.
this'll be painfully
over.
-rae'04. 091404. Friday.
Copyright ©
Rae
... [
2004-09-13 20:21:32]
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Re: pondering on misty windows
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by TheSchroedmeister on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:31:22 PM AEST
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"Think."
As a stand alone, I feel that this word is very powerful. You really captured me here, I'm glad I had to opportunity to read this.
Well done! |
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Re: pondering on misty windows
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by Renoir on
Monday, 20th February 2006 @ 11:09:31 PM AEST
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| Very colorful and in depth. A "good" read. |
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