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Teenage Angst
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:08:36 PM in AEST
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tired
of being alive
just wishing
wish
to die
and drift
away
into a relm of nothingness
and to bleed
bleed every essance within me
my soul
raw
an open festering wound
pain stabs at my heart
with every breath
drawn into my chest
ragged and
fast
as i cut up my arms
with persicion
and tecnique
shaping
forming
me into something i wish i was
instead of this vial creature
filled with pain
sorrow
fury
as i bleed
with
this
teenage angst
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-09-13 20:08:36]
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Re: Teenage Angst
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by emystar on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:12:11 PM AEST
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Very sad but written like a pro.
I could never say I like a poem like this as to it's sadness but I can say u r a great writer.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: Teenage Angst
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:31:41 PM AEST
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Nice way of writing youe emotion down.
good job. |
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Re: Teenage Angst
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:36:07 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, and with such emotional distraught, You have caught each feeling and displayed it well with the right words, I wish had even an ounce of the talent to descibe as you do...but I do not so am content to read someones else talented poetry.
~Silence~ |
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Re: Teenage Angst
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by xemptydecemberx on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:33:04 PM AEST
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| hey.. just wanted to thank you for commenting on mine, and i like, love this poem, its really really good.. keep it up |
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Re: Teenage Angst
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 01:29:18 PM AEST
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i can relate to your feeligns loads!
if you ever wanna talk... |
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