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Leaving
Contributed by
savedbydeath
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:07:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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last time walking
through these school doors
no more
I'm believing that
I'm leaving
I'm believing that
I'm leaving
Before i go
i wanna know
will i be forgotten?
You say
we're believing that
you're leaving
we're believing that
you're leaving,and
you best believe
that you will not be
forgotten
stairing at eachother
nothing would ever bother us
and now!
I'm believing tha
i'm leaving
but i just wanna know
will times be slow?
Stairing at eachother
silence in the air
and your eyes not leaving me eyes
You say,yes times'll be slow
but you know
you will not be forgotten
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2004-09-13 20:07:02]
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Re: Leaving
(User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:00:21 PM AEST
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aww rodney i dont want u to go,i'm gonna miss u so much,andrew is crying!y wont u come over one last time to hang out?pleeeze,when u go think of me,and if u meet any nice guys in nashville bring me home 1 LOL,y u outa leave anyways i love u too much,i love u girl come back ASAP!great write
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Re: Leaving
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:45:49 PM AEST
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| aww rodney. i feel so special. we are all pebbles in the pond. everyone is a pebble that makes a ripple on everyone else. i loved your write, and like cheech, i hope you come back soon. =] well even though i live like 300 miles away from nashville, ive never been ::jealous:: |
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