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murdering myself
Contributed by
serena
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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While holding you in all the glory of our blood,
mingling to death
mixing to become one
The past events leading to turn to dust
It doesnt matter any longer,
Because now the time is almost extinct
Nothing could have saved us
Thats why we ceased
Every breath increasing pain
Every word numbing more
The hate became to much
The fake acceptance and the forced smiles gained nothing,
The years of suffering hollowed our hearts to the point of no meaning,
No one could take the pain back
Unless i shattered my own being
And now standing over coniption faded
Everything moves on as self mutulation is proper in the eyes of society.
I have just become another faceless number
And i thank you for causing me to exercise my RIGHT!
Copyright ©
serena
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2004-09-13 19:57:29]
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Re: murdering myself
(User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:12:32 PM AEST
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~WOW~what an aswome write dude,it makes sence to me,and probably others,just remember poetry is poetry and self mutilation could mean ur life,u seem real cool and down to earth to hurt urself,take care,keep up the great work
savedbydeath
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Re: murdering myself
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by Silent_Composer on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:16:48 AM AEST
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Rigid agony beautiful painfilled write, emotions galore, and graphic, all in a awesome write.
~Silence~ |
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