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Incisive
Contributed by
AJG
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Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Looking through his own reflection
He nicked his face, and
Felt the numbness melt away.
He remembered he was still alive
Pain translated into a smile
Across his bleeding visage.
The drops stained the porcelain
Leaving behind stains of renewal.
His life had encased him in a
Chloroform sepulchre, but
The blade released him.
Again, he could feel.
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AJG
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2002-11-08 00:00:00]
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Re: Incisive
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 02:01:07 AM AEST
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| A wonderful write. I hope that you can find comfort in other ways then cutting. It isnt the anserw |
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Re: Incisive
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by shepdog1972 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 12:44:30 PM AEST
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some time we all need to take a look at the bigger picture.....sometime we need to feel the pain to relize that we are alive and kickin....with out pain where would we all be ???? with pain comes recovery...they go hand in hand!!!!
thanks for sharing
john |
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Re: Incisive
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by AJG on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:20:08 AM AEST
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some poems stem from the heart; some stem from the brain. Some from somewhere in between.
Thans for the concers, though. |
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