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Dad and Me
Contributed by
AJG
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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In old photos,
I see us together.
Me on your shoulders, or
Locked in a hug
The gleam in your eyes
The pride in your gaze.
You are so hopeful,
I am so safe
It's different these days. I
Don't climb on your shoulder, or
Live in your hugs.
But I do wonder
If you look at me
Like I am your boy.
Do you still gleam?
Are you still proud?
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AJG
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2002-11-07 23:30:00]
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Re: Dad and Me
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:33:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful write
this is full of love yet
sad at the same time
Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Dad and Me
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:40:55 PM AEST
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| Very touching write about your dad! Christina |
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Re: Dad and Me
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:04:07 PM AEST
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this poem is so
sweet to dediate
to your dad i bet
he is so very proud
of you for this .:*). |
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Re: Dad and Me
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by Lace1024 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:50:56 AM AEST
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| I like this one. Very nice rhythm to it. |
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