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Stranger
Contributed by
_raspberry_
on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:20:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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There is a battle raging on
Deep Inside of me
Pieces are imprisoned
And parts of me are free
Everytime I begin to feel
As if once again I'm whole
That the little pieces are reunited
...To again create one Soul...
The Monster that's inside of me
Rears his ugly head
And with his bloody razor, slices
Until that Soul is dead
I close my eyes, to see more clearly
This battle in my dreams
And watch the Happy One inside me
Dying, as She screams
Breathing, slowly, deeply,
I try to give her life
So that her Happiness may pierce me,
As she is pierced tonight
"Please, you can't die" I say
I know how to help her live
I ask a caring stranger
What help he has to give
He says he will help Imprison
My monster deep inside
That he will help the Happy One
Grow, and live, and thrive
One step forward,
Is what I choose to take
One step forward
I hope will help my fate
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_raspberry_
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2004-09-13 14:20:09]
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Re: Stranger
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by poetmarie on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:29:50 PM AEST
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| I love this. It's tragic and deep; very emotional. |
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Re: Stranger
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by markie on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:46:25 PM AEST
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| I don't think I've read you before...this is good. I look forward to more.. |
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Re: Stranger
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:11:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful and emotional poem about that inner struggle. Keep taking those steps foward. Awesome piece.
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Re: Stranger
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by xemptydecemberx on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:27:28 PM AEST
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| keep going forward.. but great poem |
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