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Before The Wake
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:51:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Don't ask, for I shall never tell;
My mind holds my hearts secret.
A dark truth hidden by a smile.
Even the stronghold of my mind will crack,
Revealing all its secrets to the world.
I'll be driven crazy before the end.
Love is a cruel master, always laughing;
Always making you want everything,
Everything you cannot have.
I'm wrong this is not love but lust.
Love is what you feel around the one,
The one who understands you, and
Whom you value highly.
Love is not cruel, life is;
It can keep love from finding you,
And you end up sad, bitter, and angry.
Goodnight and sweet dreams,
May you find happiness at your wake.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2004-09-13 04:51:20]
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Re: Before The Wake
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:54:59 AM AEST
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Haunting, well written poem.
Greetz,
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Re: Before The Wake
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by arden on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 07:49:07 AM AEST
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hmmm well.. its interesting. cant say that i agree with some of it (but thats not the point)
but i like the ending, its a sweet yet sad poem. great work.
Arden |
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