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a puzzle ripped apart
Contributed by
lanna047
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:24:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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every night I lie in my bed
wrestling all the things in my head
one after another, they take their turn
into my soul, I can feel them burn
I think of how life has gone wrong
how I don't ever feel like I belong
all the burdens that only stifle me
the things that no one else seems to see
a thousand-piece puzzle ripped apart
and I have no idea of where to start
how to put the fragments back together
or what will make the task get better
frustrations piled up over the years
now lead me to another round of tears
in this darkness, I must suffer alone
with no one to trust, I'm on my own
the tears ebb and flow like the tide
the silent sobs finally subside
maybe I sleep, then pretend I'm alright
until it starts again tomorrow night
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lanna047
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2004-09-12 22:24:52]
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Re: a puzzle ripped apart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:44:03 AM AEST
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Oh wow, this is really awesome.
I can really relate to this, the flow is beautiful, and I'm sure the words ring so true for everyone...
Very thought-provoking, intense and riveting.
Brilliant.
Keep writing!
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Re: a puzzle ripped apart
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by candysears on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:13:47 PM AEST
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Very good write..Things in time get better.
I really enjoyed reading this poem..You turn it into something positive..
God Bless! |
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