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Faces in the Looking Glass
Contributed by
luinil
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:49:37 PM in AEST
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Faces in the looking glass
Distorted smirks mock my past
Obediently put on my mask
Discarding the face I wore last
Porcelain grin to hide my crimson
Silken black to shroud my vision
No voice to speak, no ears to listen
In blood and mirth I built my prison
Cracking mold entraps my secret
Painfully forcing me to keep it
Dream of songs I can’t sing yet
But faces never let me quit
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Re: Faces in the Looking Glass
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:51:29 PM AEST
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Excellent poem and insight to the body that houses us all.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Faces in the Looking Glass
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by ToriVeigh on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:15:40 PM AEST
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| A glimpse into what we all show the world....masks. I hope you have that one person you know that knows who you really are. We all need one. Great write! |
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Re: Faces in the Looking Glass
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:38:55 PM AEST
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| i loved this. i just dont know how this could be better, but oh well. |
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Re: Faces in the Looking Glass
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:38:26 PM AEST
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| We all wear masks sometimes. Great write. |
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Re: Faces in the Looking Glass
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by Lee on
Friday, 29th October 2004 @ 10:23:19 AM AEST
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| You've dealt with your theme very well and your rhymes are wonderful! This poem is an enjoyable read. |
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