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247
Contributed by
savedbydeath
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:42:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I feel this is all the time
you're as sweet as lime
i hope this is not a crime
you'd give me your last dime
i know if you could
you would
i should
never broken like wood
24/7 i feel great
24/7 hope this is fate
24/7 we open the gate
24/7 lets go on a date
24/7 i wont be late
we care
this is fare
are we there
we care
we're together
forever & ever
we'll never say never
we'll be together forever
24/7 i feel great
24/7 hope this is fate
24/7 we open the gate
24/7 lets go on a date
24/7 i wont be late
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Re: 247
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:53:48 PM AEST
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I like the poem, its a positive dream of a day.
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Re: 247
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by booboo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:40:32 PM AEST
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LOL its a very beautiful poem i agree with AspenGlow,but to be honest it sounds like something hilary duff would write if she writes her own lyrics
booboo
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Re: 247
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 10:31:46 PM AEST
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| great write. ill miss you. and on the other note, the administrators liked this poem, there was nothing that had to do with censor in it. =] |
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