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Although
Contributed by
LadyEmotion123
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Although he will never see me for me
he is still the apple that dangles from my tree
And even if he looks through me instead of at me
my heart will never stop humming to the sound of his voice, it's eternal beat
And just because no matter how hard I try to to catch his eye
he keeps passing me by I will never give up for he is the sun in my sky
Who cares if I know I'll never have the chance to hold or even come close to his hand
in my heart he'll always be "my man"
Near or far high or low
he is the candle that gives me my glow
Does it hurt that I realize
he will never be my Valentine?
No, because even if he never gives me the time or day
whether he knows it or not he'll always have me stashed away for a rainy day
So although he will never see me for me
he is still the apple to my tree
Copyright ©
LadyEmotion123
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2004-09-12 19:23:50]
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Re: Although
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by sober_punk_2 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:40:43 PM AEST
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| very good |
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Re: Although
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:46:38 PM AEST
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WOW! What a neat lil poem... I like... very much... and can relate to it as well...
your emotion is well expressed... good writing... keep it up...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Although
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:18:37 PM AEST
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| lovely write and try sending it to him, HOPEFULLY YOU COULD GET LUCKY |
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Re: Although
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 03:53:51 AM AEST
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my heart will never stop humming to the sound of his voice, it's eternal beat
This is a lovely poem and this line really says it all. Beautiful, emotion-filled piece.
WinterFawn |
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Re: Although
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by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:56:09 PM AEST
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| Wow as soon as he reads this he's bound to be yours! keep it up |
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