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lovely suicide
Contributed by
oneteartofellpain
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:33:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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time by time u saw her walk alone- with no one walkin by her side..
time by time u saw her crying...those golden tears fallin down her tears- she cried alone
time by t ime u saw her cut her skin...didnt say anything- left her alone in her loon to cry.
time by time she asked for ur help all u did was look and tell her to ***** off...
now she sits rocking her self to her own hell...stop u ask her...she looks at u n tells you to ***** off...
the grl u once saw walking by herself is no longer sane...all those tears she couldnt tame
it was all a game to hard for her to tame...
now she lays on the floor....blood covering her shirt...a note sayin her "reasons" ...u pick it up n notice u could of saved this grl.
late at night she haunts u....u wake up n see ur self that time by time u see urself walk alone...
time by time u see urself cryin
before u know it u see urself carving n bleeding for forgiveness...
little did u know ud be the girl, the grl layin on the floor covered with blood with a note saying YOUR
REASONS.....
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2004-09-12 18:33:25]
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Re: lovely suicide
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by darkplaidbabe on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:50:32 PM AEST
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you're right its a beautiful poem, but dont get too cocky about your writing, it doesnt flatter you. in any case, great write!
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Re: lovely suicide
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by screwup on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:33:09 PM AEST
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so sorry it took me so long to get my comment on here. great poem... although very sad... keep writing babe.
~Deanna |
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Re: lovely suicide
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by immortal_pain on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:58:46 PM AEST
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| blackplaid is right. dont gt too cocky but it is a very very nce write |
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