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Share The Love
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:11:31 PM in AEST
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In a world filled with eyes
That are all dark and weary
One is light and cheery
Filled with love
That will try to bug
The ones without the love
Trying to piece together
The worlds dark side
With the light from within
That will unfold
and lay its self out nicely.
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Pyrofungus
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Re: Share The Love
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by sober_punk_2 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:15:20 PM AEST
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good one again................read my new ones and comment plz
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Re: Share The Love
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:40:47 PM AEST
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| this is nice little poem with some great lines - the first 2 stand out inparticular. superb |
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Re: Share The Love
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by xRotten_Insidex on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:03:26 PM AEST
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Nice write! I liked it alot I havent ever really read any happy poetry so it was really nice. Thnx for commenting on my write too and for puttin a smile on my face.
There needs to be more people like you in this world
-Ash |
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Re: Share The Love
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:51:00 AM AEST
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| Great write. |
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Re: Share The Love
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by a_bear on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:54:55 PM AEST
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| This is so cool. I wrote one similar a long time ago called "little priks"...meaning words of happiness going around always priking away at people that were filled with sadness...trying to cheer them up. ..thanks. I enjoyed this. |
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Re: Share The Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:49:53 PM AEST
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Lovely write..
Jenni |
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Re: Share The Love
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:18:12 PM AEST
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beautiful sentiment..... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Share The Love
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by Heartfilledblood on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 07:33:38 PM AEST
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really good poem. good messege.
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Re: Share The Love
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:11:08 PM AEST
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Light is, indeed, intended to shine on others, not to light our own path.
Take care, and light up faces.
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Re: Share The Love
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:43:03 PM AEST
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Simple, vivid and quite so, indeed! A heart that is full of real love and joy radiates it like a sun. Such is the nature of Light, and of Love. Like fire, it consumes, but not to emptiness, rather it fills the emptiness around it.
Slàn
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