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Give Myself
Contributed by
BlazeingHeart
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:01:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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You are always there,
Yea I always knew you more than liked me.
You use the L-word everyday,
I say it back but as time goes by,
I am not sure what it means anymore.
Do you?
I am not sure.
I do not even know myself any more.
You expect so much of me,
Suff I never expected to need.
I need you lips on ine,
Your breath on my neck,
Your hands on my hips.
But I do not want to admit it.
So I will close my eyes,
Loose myself,
Give myself.
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BlazeingHeart
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2004-09-12 15:01:50] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Give Myself
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jolly on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:47:54 PM AEST (User
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I really liked this. the over use of the L word...like anything else it begins to lose its meaning if it's used too much. Great poem. |
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