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the forced smile u believe is real
Contributed by
monophobic
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:54:15 PM in AEST
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you see my smile and think its-real
you see nothing of what-i really am
i hide all my-scars
and my biggest lieis-me
i can't take the pain so-how could you
if i u want to know me you better-find out the truth
about my smile and how-real this pain is
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Re: the forced smile u believe is real
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by essab88 on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:01:47 PM AEST
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| good write. that poem describes me alot. no one sees my scars either |
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Re: the forced smile u believe is real
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by RealCrystal on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:08:42 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem and how you used the pauses between the thoughts to emphasize your thoughts |
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