|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Gone
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:25:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Too Weak to think, Too Weak to cry
Cant take the pain
Even though it never goes away.
You bleed me dry
Too scared to scream, Too scared to move
Wanting to shut my eyes and dissappear
But the fear never goes away
You scare me stiff
Too blind to see, Too blind to run
Cant take the darkness
Even though I cant guide my way out of it
You embrace me in your darkness
Too empty to feel, Too empty to fall
Dont know what to think
Always empty inside
You've taken away my emotions
Your taking away pieces of me
Leaving me with nothing
Making me empty, Yet still bleeding
Stuck in your darkness forever I shall be
Theres no return, For you've binded me and shattered my soul
Copyright ©
xRotten_Insidex
... [
2004-09-12 13:25:26]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:32:24 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There's always those people out there that just kill us inside and take everything away from us...great poem
please comment on my work too
summer |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:36:41 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
an emotional write, very well written, the flow was great...I hope that one day you feel strong enough to rebuild your shattered soul *hugs*
takecare
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:39:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
really really good write... flows very well, thanks for commenting on my writing.. take care
-x |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:57:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Another excellent write.
On days of darkness, its off to the park for me, to sit by the lake and sneak food to the ducks, and geese, and watch the children play......once in a while even luck seems to smile......and a female smiles at me......then its off in my mind to have a ball......before she nags constantly. |
|
|
Re: Gone
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 06:08:46 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This really quite dark,
A very good write!
Star x x x |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
