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One Person
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:07:03 PM in AEST
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See me
I’ve walked right past you
Whispered in your closed right ear
Brushed up against your back
Saw you turn away
No sign of wisdom
Curious to the point of just yourself
So silent
Just a false image of satisfaction
One in which it can be true
The street in which you stand on
Is getting much crowded now
Just standing amongst others
Starring at the sky
Thinking
Wondering
Watching
A look of pure astonishment
One filled with greed
Of the knowledge in which you seek
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Pyrofungus
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Re: One Person
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:32:01 PM AEST
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a very intresting write, I liked it,
pixie xx |
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Re: One Person
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by sober_punk on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:33:26 PM AEST
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| good,keep writing,keep comenting |
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Re: One Person
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:43:29 PM AEST
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Curious to the point of just yourself
I love that line....really love it... |
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Re: One Person
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:57:21 PM AEST
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i agree w/ pixie.. it is interesting, i like it as well, keep it up, and thanks for reading mine.
-x |
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Re: One Person
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:01:10 PM AEST
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| Very complex. Deeply enjoyed this. I'm fixin' to read more of your stuff. Much peace. |
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Re: One Person
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 05:03:35 PM AEST
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Ah, great subject, one that needs a lot of exploration. You've got the first few shovel fulls quite nicely. If you dig deeper, let me know.
Take care,
David |
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Re: One Person
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by Buggsy on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 01:51:40 AM AEST
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Great poem I Loved it. This is a topic/subject that I myself find very interesting, and you wrote about it so well. Once again great poem.
Sean |
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Re: One Person
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by DeathByLove on
Saturday, 30th October 2004 @ 05:26:20 PM AEST
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| You have written so many great things I look forward to reading the upcoming events of your paper and pen |
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