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Razorblade Stained Mirrors
Contributed by
xemptydecemberx
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Breaking down again
As I pick up this blade
And cut over old scars
Through lies that I've made
Silent tears whispering
A story of depression
From these eyes that leak
A bleeding confession
I stare into razorblade stainded mirrors
And all that I see...
Is a person staring back
That I never wanted to be
Its as if each mark tells a story
A book on a wrist
All this pain and frustraighton
You've always seemed to have missed
All you see now are scars
Not the imbeded block of pain
Steady little blade
Missing every single vein
I stare into razorblade stained mirrors
And all that I be
Is a confused little girl
I never wanted you to see..
Copyright ©
xemptydecemberx
... [
2004-09-12 12:49:58]
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Re: Razorblade Stained Mirrors
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:53:50 PM AEST
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very powerful and sad write, very good flow *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Razorblade Stained Mirrors
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by xRotten_Insidex on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:05:48 PM AEST
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Great Write. I love the way how you put so much emotion into it. I hope poetry relieves your pain too.
-Ash
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Re: Razorblade Stained Mirrors
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by kyletycz on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:39:08 PM AEST
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Wonderful write, i liked it alot
l8r
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Re: Razorblade Stained Mirrors
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by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 02:06:16 PM AEST
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"nothing special"????!?!?!
"just another poem"?!?!?!?!?!?
this isnt "just another poem", this is a way with words, it is..truthfull, it is painfull...it spells out a sad story......
excellent work.
you are a great poet.
keep on smile'n =D
Tweek
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