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Of All The Things I Miss Most
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:29:28 PM in AEST
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Of all the things that I miss most,
Is my mind my sanity is now just a ghost,
A thing of the past what is it to be sane?
When you’re crazy you can’t feel pain.
Sanity used to be a close friend of mine,
But it couldn’t turn water into wine,
But now I can I can do anything in my world,
People whisper about me, the crazy girl.
I know that everyone is out to get me,
In my head I hear the buzzing of a bee,
Then a clear voice rings in my ears,
I can’t help but to cry those insane tears.
The voices tell me to kill those who lie,
That liars & back stabbers deserve to die,
So I take the knife that lies in the drawer,
I can hear them all calling me a whore.
Murder & blood are all I think about,
I wish to hear my victims scream & shout,
As they will pay for every last one of their sins,
They were the ones who made my sanity wear thin.
I wake up on the floor with blood all around,
Red rivers everywhere but not a single sound,
Apart from my own death defying screams,
I have killed myself or so it seems?
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:33:21 PM AEST
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| love it! |
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by sober_punk on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:31:37 PM AEST
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| good |
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:04:24 PM AEST
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I liked this one much. Thank you for sharing.
Sometimes what I miss most........sometimes I just miss me. |
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:59:56 PM AEST
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Awww Pixie..this was awesome.... a bit scary tho ..lol
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by vampyrekiss on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:43:08 PM AEST
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very good i liked it alot was a bit creepy. Not like your other stuff ive read its great keep it up :)
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:48:49 PM AEST
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yeppers! lol! correctly under the right catagory! hehe, great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:02:24 PM AEST
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It's safe for me to say that I've felt this way before. I hope to never feel it again. Remember this: I still love you and your poetry. I will be there for you when you need it. I'm always just a mouse-click away.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 06:57:11 AM AEST
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| Kind of scary hehe. :P Great write though. |
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:49:16 AM AEST
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*shiver*!!!! What a poem!...very well written with loads of emotion!
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by bernard on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:57:57 AM AEST
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| Hello Pixie another great poem I love the way you spread the blood around.5/5 love bernard. |
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Re: Of All The Things I Miss Most
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by Bruce on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 09:35:06 AM AEST
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| great write, i thought u were on the right track, but if this is what makes u happy, what can i say, but good luck |
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