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Stepping Off The Greyhound Bus
Contributed by
tbird
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:33:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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And I was stripped
Left naked before you
Never had I been treated so sweetly savage.
I had no desire to hide,
It would have been of no use
To hide behind a costume that didn't fit
I wanted you to see me.
To perceive me
Completely
Devoid of the usual obstacles.
And what a picture could not reveal
Was prostrated before you, face-to-face
Raw and unfettered
By the harnesses frequently placed upon Truth
And I knew that it would be safe
In your possession.
Copyright ©
tbird
... [
2004-09-12 10:33:15]
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Re: Stepping Off The Greyhound Bus
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by BrandySwanson on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:47:26 AM AEST
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amazingly written loved it great job and thanks for your comment on my poem Warning by the Queen B****.
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Re: Stepping Off The Greyhound Bus
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 04:13:25 PM AEST
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Awesome job here...I really loved this write
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Re: Stepping Off The Greyhound Bus
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by mysticpoet on
Wednesday, 3rd November 2004 @ 08:22:21 PM AEST
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| I agree with the others-this was very good |
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Re: Stepping Off The Greyhound Bus
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by Sir_Odd on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 04:16:14 PM AEST
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Good write...
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