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Only you
Contributed by
icequeen
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:49:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Do that
Do this
That’s right
I’m pi$$ed.
Take my hand
Give it back
Take my heart
Burn it black.
Set me free
Change your mind
Let me be
Then rewind.
Take a dare
Tell the truth
Chicken out
Suck your tooth.
Love me right
Love me bad
Make me smile
Make me mad.
Feelings real
Feelings fake
I can deal
But I break.
It’s the end
Of us two
Don’t blame me
Only you.
Yeah you plead
Heart of stone
Better off
On my own.
©2004 Amy Pluess
Copyright ©
icequeen
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2004-09-12 09:49:56]
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Re: Only you
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:52:16 AM AEST
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how about Better Off On My Own :)
great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Only you
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:52:26 AM AEST
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| I think Better off on my own is good as pixie suggested. Great write. |
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Re: Only you
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by Orlando on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:08:07 AM AEST
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| Before I read any others comments I have to say that "Better off..." stood out to me more than "Only You". So count me with the rest of 'em! |
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