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Awaying
Contributed by
smg
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I'll drink my suicide between my shadows,
Enjoying its pure true moment,
I'll taste my blood against the windows
Of my words who died so silent.
I shall clear my steps before I am passed
Where my lost dreams are swept inside
Punished to dig against my past,
Covicted for being my guide.
Under my sealess Moon the lost flower
Of the latest morning blows away
On the wings of my thought's windy hour;
Wakening, I hate the world today.
Copyright ©
smg
... [
2002-11-07 16:00:00]
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Re: Awaying
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:28:56 AM AEST
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| Such a touching sad poem,but nicely done! Christina |
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Re: Awaying
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by tease_whizz on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 07:08:52 PM AEST
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| this is a great poem - very touching and powerful without being melodramatic. well done. xxx |
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Re: Awaying
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by Roshie on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:01:31 AM AEST
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| I loved it, sad, yet straight to the point, short and powerful, very well written. |
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