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A foolish journey

Contributed by Naijerana on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:16:15 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Death is freedom
Not a punishment
Do some say otherwise
To my opinion it to depends
On how you die
With great pain caused by someone else
Or just die in your sleep
For one who has died with great pain
Caused by someone else
Might stay between the 2 worlds
With only one thing
On their mind
Like I must protect my son
Or
I must hurt and kill him
Like he did to me
But still not all sees it
Like others do
For the more god or goddesses believers
Might see it like a curse
Or demons
But even believers think otherwise
For there are many cultures
With different gods and goddesses
And they have al there meanings
But why are the tortured soul’s
Send back to earth
While does who are still mortal
Can to put the man to justice
So why should they be send
Back to the mortal world
While they can see it
In the eternal heavens
With their family on their side
But why should one then
Make such a journey
If does who still life can to
Put one to justice
Maybe because does who are not good
Can always be smarter
Then does who are not evil
But still we are mortal
And we can all die
So even in the end
The one who does no good
Will die and come to justice
Even if it takes years
So one who will still go
Makes

A foolish journey

Copyright Â© Naijerana ... [ 2004-09-12 08:16:15]
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