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Twilight Lover
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:13:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You are my twilight lover,
In the dark is where we find our cover,
Holding onto each other tight,
As we love with all our might.
Darkness holds a secret rapture,
That no daylight can wish to capture,
The dancing shadows that we cast,
But our sexual writhing never seems to last.
Moving slowly in the darkness,
You touch renders me helpless,
Black is the colour of our cardinal sins,
In your pure rawness I want to swim.
I always pray for darkness to fall,
To your bed, I can hear your calls,
Everything else is forgotten when we melt,
Into each other as pure wanting is felt.
My night time lover, my dark Romeo,
To your temple is where I long to go,
To worship your body in the dark,
On naked flesh I allow you to make your mark.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-12 08:13:43]
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Re: Twilight Lover
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by Icequeen on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 10:01:14 AM AEST
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| A few lines are a little awkward but apart from that its darkly beautiful... not a fan of HIM are you? Thanks for your very recent feedback; for some reason that I never thought of that title... damn I’m thick! ;-p |
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Re: Twilight Lover
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:46:49 AM AEST
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I liked this one here..It had very good flow to it.
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