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This Life
Contributed by
sober_punk
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Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:21:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
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In the end judgment will fall upon us
It's in the choices we make
What will be our destiny
The battle is our fate
To lose is to sell your soul
This is what we face
We must gain control
We must push onward
We must win this race
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2004-09-12 02:21:19]
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Re: This Life
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:50:22 AM AEST
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Fair statement and well written
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Re: This Life
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by thumper on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:48:59 AM AEST
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I like this. Short, sweet, and to the point. Good flow. Good work. Welcome to YPDC. It's a nice place to visit, and then ya get hooked!! LOL
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Re: This Life
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:10:37 PM AEST
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Great! I completely agree...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: This Life
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 08:48:28 PM AEST
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| Great write. I agree. |
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