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I'll try my best...
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:10:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm over it
cuz breaking up for you
was so easy to do
Im over it
I was over it long ago, so long ago
so long ago its seems
prop open the door
you led me through
give me a message
am I not over you?
and this is all thats left
scraping paper to document
Ive packed a change of clothes
and its time to move on
I never wanted to hold you back
I just wanted to hold on
but now my chance is gone
my chance is gone
cuz you've moved on
I know where I stand, a girl
I can see my breath tonight
but it doesnt mean
Im actually breathing
silence is golden
especially in this case
the good intentions that you had
now only come to this
and although he saw the mark
the arrow missed
it isn't exciting
reciting the stories
of kind words, turn hurting
when routine gets broing
I know where I stand a girl
trapped in the body of a women
and I'll take what your willing to give
and I'll use it to teach myself
how it feels to live
The walk on part of a backround
shot of a movie, Im not in
as if I had a chance anyway
so I packed a change of clothes
cuz it's time to try and move on
silence is golden
especially in this case
what is it your coming from?
what is it your running from?
is it that hard to see?
and if your feeling scared
remember those times
you know they meant everything to me
silence is golden
especially in this case
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2004-09-12 00:10:11]
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Re: I'll try my best...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:23:39 AM AEST
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Very sad but awesomely written,
I know the feelings from past.
great write.
luv, huggs, great writing,
emy |
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Re: I'll try my best...
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 07:28:37 PM AEST
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what is it your coming from?
what is it your running from?
is it that hard to see? I really liked these lines, they stood out to me because I feel this way... great poem strong words as usuall A++++ |
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Re: I'll try my best...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:33:37 PM AEST
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"I never wanted to hold you back
I just wanted to hold on" Actually this is the line I relate to most. It's a good write. Cheers! |
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