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Uprooted
Contributed by
amsy
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:17:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Trains are closer than before.
Birds do not break through my dreams here.
Slammed doors and other foreign noises do instead.
I stare at peach walls that I did not choose.
I eat cereal because it is quick.
I take the bus and go to class.
I have been uprooted
and I am starting to grow,
but I feel like I am growing away from the sun.
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amsy
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2004-09-11 23:17:36]
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Re: Uprooted
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:22:24 PM AEST
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| interesting, but awesome write |
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Re: Uprooted
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by Calista on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:03:31 AM AEST
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this poem is so great! i felt like that so many times when i was uprooted, and i love how you pointed out the little differences that make sucha big difference inside of you. wonderful,
~Calista |
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Re: Uprooted
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 12:38:16 AM AEST
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| amazing... |
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