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Room
Contributed by
randomguy
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:33:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Here in my room,
With nothing to really do.
Just sitting in my room,
Thinking all about you.
Traveling down this road of life,
Seemingly without any strife.
Though I keep it all inside me,
All within this life.
Thoughts of her,
Thoughts of him,
Thiughts of things lost,
Are there any things gained?
I am just sitting in my room.
Nothing left to do anymore,
Without you in my life,
It all seems lost today.
The life we choose determines fate.
But what happens if I can't wait,
For the one life reveals for me?
All about this life.
Thoughts of you,
Thoughts of him,
You with just him,
What the hell have I gained?
Copyright ©
randomguy
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2004-09-11 21:33:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 11:56:59 PM AEST (User
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but what happens if i can't wait......i love that line....heartfelt write....... |
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Re: Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by oldernotwiser on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 01:32:24 PM AEST (User
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until the what? |
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Re: Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by randomguy on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 04:38:14 PM AEST (User
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Whoops, i guess i went over my little comment character limit. anyway, it SHOULD read "Same subject matter as my other first poem (Thoughts), a love that is out of reach, and will always be until the 'him' is gone and she realizes the truth" Sorry about that, i feel stupid lol. |
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Re: Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by rockstarr12747 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 08:07:43 PM AEST (User
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deep poem man just keep up your feelings and love will come
CRYSTAL |
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Re: Room
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:03:17 AM AEST (User
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Another good poem. I like the way you use your poems, your writing, to write about yourself, to get your thoughts on paper, they're so much easier to understand that way. It's a good way to find yourself.
Take care.
David |
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