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Thin is In
Contributed by
LadyEmotion123
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:02:27 PM in AEST
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Excuse me for not being able to fit into a size 2
so what now u gonna make me walk over hot coals with no shoes
my mistake
I didn't know u were not supposed to see me behind this rake
but I am glad I could make u giggle
because when I walk parts of my body jiggle
Oh no don't apologize everyone cries
I'll be ok after a big mac and fries
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LadyEmotion123
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2004-09-11 18:02:27]
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Re: Thin is In
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by ShadowDaughter on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:11:48 PM AEST
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*loves this*
Our society sets such a standard in this respect and it's really just sad . . . great job depicting this, love the in-your-face attitude here (good for you, for not caring what people think!) and the irony of the last two lines is awesome.
Change the "u"s to "you"s (IM lnguage jst dtrax frm a poem's pwr) and you'll have a fantastic poem on your hands.
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Re: Thin is In
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:16:34 PM AEST
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WELCOME to the site! I really thought this was cute! It does have a feel of "I don't care what anybody thinks" feel to it, and that alone is to be commended.
Well done!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: Thin is In
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:30:09 PM AEST
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I think this is outstanding!! Too many people run their lives on the opinions of others. I think the most important person's opinion is that of yourself. Power to you.
I don't like Big Mac's but I will share a Whopper with you!
Rita |
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Re: Thin is In
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by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:49:31 PM AEST
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| This is the coolest poem i think ive ever read about being who you are. i love it to death! im glad you can realize it doesnt matter what you look like. |
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