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stay as you are
Contributed by
suzie007uk
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:25:26 PM in AEST
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STAY AS YOU ARE
How do you harden up a person that is week?
How can they get mad when tears they’ve cried all week?
How do they get strong when going with the flow?
When everyone is miles ahead and they are still on slow
How do they feel angry when inside they feel so calm?
How do they explain when they are overcome by charm?
How do they get moody when all they do is smile?
How do they show aggression when they think it not worthwhile?
How do they show madness when they are so polite?
Maybe they sleep better no worries through the night
Suzie
1/01/04
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Re: stay as you are
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 05:13:15 PM AEST
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| Very nice. |
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Re: stay as you are
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:41:30 PM AEST
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You may have hit that old proverbial nail on the head. Keep stress from your life as much as possible. Don't let your feelings get out of control. Know that you are in charge of your life and your decisions will determine its outcome. This is quite an insightful write.
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Re: stay as you are
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:36:34 PM AEST
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| excellent and powerful write. intriguing. =] |
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Re: stay as you are
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:27:54 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: stay as you are
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by suzie007uk on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:15:03 PM AEST
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hey guys thank very much for the feedback............... being honest with me is very much appreciated suzie
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