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Past life dreams
Contributed by
LadyEmotion123
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:15:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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2 years of luv down the drain
cups of luv filled with pain
weeping roses on broken stems
wishing this sob story would end
kisses from the enemies lips
from their glass of deception I did sadly sip
an argument that stops communication for days
finally apologizing just to do it again
since luv hurts as much as it usually does
CUPID can keep his arrows of luv
It's been two years since this relation
which has cost me great devastation
that's why I can't seem to see
why I can't get rid of these past life DREAMS
maybe in some subconcious way I MISS HIM
then again if that were the case would'nt I be with him?
Even if deep down I do
Going back is not an option for me...yet would it be for u?
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LadyEmotion123
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2004-09-11 16:15:48]
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Re: Past life dreams
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:41:00 PM AEST
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| a curious and powerful poem - sad that the relationship was dead... still the ending left we wondering what will happen next.. |
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Re: Past life dreams
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 05:18:44 PM AEST
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| A powerful poem. Very sad. |
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Re: Past life dreams
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by emospaztic on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 05:59:28 PM AEST
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Spell out LOVE and other words. Otherwise, it's pretty good.
-emo. |
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Re: Past life dreams
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by ToriVeigh on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:10:55 PM AEST
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| It is incredible what we put up with. I understand that type of connection. Keep moving forward! Backwards is not a good direction for you. Take care. |
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Re: Past life dreams
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:45:24 PM AEST
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Terrific poem loved it glad I came across this one.
Can relate to the words....although many years ago now it happened. Forward is the best way it hurts to much to go back
love SweetAngelukxxxx |
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Re: Past life dreams
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by Writting_Fever on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:58:16 PM AEST
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| Powerful words, sad meaning |
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