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The Sky's Dark Gaze
Contributed by
Pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Crystallized eyes
Mocking the winter’s peak
A sky so gray
It’s crying like us
We can’t see past the sky’s dark gaze
Like our own inner being
We struggle to find ourselves in the stars
Maybe even floating on a lighter cloud
Jumping from minute to minute
Trying to figure out who we are
But we can’t
We never will
The fogs to thick
Our eyes are not meant to see through it
So we walk around unknown to ourselves
Trying to see straight
Looking for clues to who we are
In the planets and stars that surround us
In the night’s sky…
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Pyrofungus
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2004-09-11 14:20:23]
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Re: The Sky's Dark Gaze
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:24:31 PM AEST
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Wow! I hope more people get to read this because I think it is very well done! I love the emotion of wonderment, and this poem did it for me. Well I always wonder, and my mind it wanders. lol
Well done pyro!
Angel always...joni |
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Re: The Sky's Dark Gaze
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by pixie on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:02:18 PM AEST
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intresting write Summer, I really likd this one
pixie xx |
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Re: The Sky's Dark Gaze
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:45:32 PM AEST
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Looking for clues to who we are
another great line...we don't have a clue, most of us.
Thanks for the great post. |
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Re: The Sky's Dark Gaze
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:58:42 PM AEST
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I've read most of the poems that you submitted, and I've come to the conclusion that you write in a really interesting way, I dunno how to explain it, but I like it, It's really cool, keep it up and keep 'em coming
-x |
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Re: The Sky's Dark Gaze
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 01:06:54 AM AEST
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Yeah, this is cool stuff. Dead Reckoning1983 would like this too. I'll mention it.
Groovy.
--Mothy |
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Re: The Sky's Dark Gaze
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:40:54 PM AEST
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a yes
and with that comes curiosity
yes..
i have thought on things simalair to this poem
while gazing out to the sky
maybe listening to metallica
their lyrics always struck me as poetry
iand i realize how little iknow of myself
-->Rae |
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