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And The Mirror Bled For Her
Contributed by
Overstated
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:50:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Bright eyes is so misplaced
Delivered in the moonlight
Sprinkled in love
And cooked in pain
She’s risen in a world
That loathes all its strains
She’s still my vacant girl
Maybe she’ll never rise
Maybe the stars will never swirl
But she’s perfect in my eyes
A fresh taste of sublime
A moment with her
Can never ever be described
But all I can see is a fracture
Deep cuts on the glass
This mirrors doused in cobwebs
Reflecting her past
Focusing on her debts
The murmurs of a lion
Raging in her soul
There’s one thing certain
Her past will never let her sweet mind go…
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Overstated
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2004-09-11 12:50:24]
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by Solnubis on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:14:47 PM AEST
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| Very well written. Is this about a love that cannot be. Or wanting a love from someone you can not have? Just wondering? |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:22:39 PM AEST
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The protagonist is in love with the girl and is watching her life.
However; I wanted to hint that the protagonist was actually her – by using the idea of the mirror. Hence the girl will eventually get swallowed up by herself if that makes sense to you! |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:02:29 PM AEST
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this is amazing!!!!
it's so deep thinking, taking in each and every detail!
its magnificent, despite the fact that it's also a very sad write. |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:29:22 PM AEST
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Wow. What I wouldn't do to have this exact poem written about me. It's beautiful. I love it. A lot. :)
~ Moonlit |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:37:30 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 11:10:45 PM AEST
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Even though her past haunts her still,this girl is strong,she stands still against past memories and doesn't let go.Beauty is still contained inside her.I think she'll be just fine..
PumpkinPie |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:20:19 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, I thought is was written well describing details to the letter, beautfiully done, cheers for sharing. |
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Re: And The Mirror Bled For Her
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by NightOwl on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 04:59:21 PM AEST
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Absolutely amazing... words cannot describe. Such emotion comes from it! Excellently done... perfect.
*~Erin~* |
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