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Empty Shell
Contributed by
Nyx
on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
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What used to be heartbeat
Is now no more than an annoying rattle
That I want to suffocate
My name is no longer my name-
Just a word used to summon me
To touch me is to touch a corpse-
I might as well be.
I'm empty, hallow and decaying
Life has no meaning, no joy
Hobbies have turned into devices I use to pass the time
Between the time I wake up and the moment I fall asleep.
Copyright ©
Nyx
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2002-11-07 12:00:00]
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Re: Empty Shell
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by Chrissylee on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:18:55 PM AEST
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there is alot of hurt in this poem... you need to find some new adventures and new romances to make life worth living.... great write.
peace, love and happy poetry |
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Re: Empty Shell
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by OreO on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:21:45 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful yet so sad
I can relate to the part of life having no
meaning or joy so well. Great write
I want to read more Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Empty Shell
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by cryingonmyporch on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 02:27:27 PM AEST
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| When the light looks really dim at thew end of the tunnel I say to myself "There is someone else out there who is just a little more hurt me,little wrose off then me, and someone just committed suicide so I wouldn't have to" Some times this saying is all I have to look forward to. |
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