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Crimson
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:23:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I want to know the secrets of you heart
the ones about life and its pain
i want to hold you inside my arms
and make you feel loved once again
i want to wipe your tears with the back of my hand
so you can feel my affection
i want to be with you until the end
so you do not know rejection
i want to see you smile in the times of your strife
so i know that i did what i could
i want to be with you in all your sad moments
and you depend on me if you would
i want to stop your mascara from bleeding
when you cry your broken tears
i want to help you to realize
i want to be your scapegoat of fears
Copyright ©
abnormalpunk
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2004-09-11 12:23:15]
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Re: Crimson
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by poetmarie on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:46:18 PM AEST
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| Very romantic and touching. I like it. |
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Re: Crimson
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:26:11 PM AEST
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This is a beautiful, touching piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: Crimson
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 03:36:32 PM AEST
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A very well written piece worth a whole 5 stars!
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Re: Crimson
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by suzie007uk on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 06:08:02 PM AEST
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| i was more than ready to reach for the tissues after reading this, touched me enormously. suzie |
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