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No Right To Judge...
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:36:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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That adrenalin,
Was some thing else.
That pain,
I swear, the devil had dealt!
I failed again!
I cut my wrist!
I can’t quit!
… And that’s the worse bit!!!
I can’t help but slit,
Because I feel like ****!
I got all stressed today,
And just blew.
I run up stairs,
And cried endlessly in my room.
I felt so alone.
As I put my head on the pillow.
But still nothing changed,
As the wind grounded out side my window.
So picking up a sharp razor,
I sat my back against the door.
And then I slit,
Until the blood began to poor.
And knowing that I’d failed,
I cried a little more.
And then wept in the silence,
Still sitting on the floor…
That pain was awesome,
Yet, it wasn’t quite so great.
Because I gave into cutting,
And let the razor control my fate!
I wouldn’t have cared if I had died!
Crying all alone there.
But I just promised I wouldn’t do suicide.
Because so many now care.
I cut because I hurt in great depths,
I’m falling apart, and I’ve no strength left!
I know some people do love me.
‘Coz, they cried, the other day, when I said I’d cut.
And their tears really hurt me,
Because I thought they’d just given up…
Only now they’re just telling me,
That my life doesn’t suck!
But they don’t live it for me,
So they’ve no right to judge!
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deathdrop
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2004-09-11 10:36:25]
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Re: No Right To Judge...
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 10:42:40 AM AEST
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Leviticus 19: 28 says........ you shall not make any cuttings in your flesh for the dead. nor tattoo any marks on you.. I am the LOrd.
you do what you want.. no one can stop you.. BUT please read my last two poems I have placed today. before you cut again trying to ease the pain.... You need to stand up to your problems that is only temporary and find a way somewhere and I believe that is GOD. your death... is for eternity. they say if you take your life you go to hell.. Maybe you don't even believe it.. does that erase it from truth if it really is there. think about your family if you can't think about yourself.. sandy
(JUDGING..... dO YOU THINK YOUR THE ONLY ONE THAT DOES THIS... you want to act like others ? get your mind off of yourself..and let those people who love you help you... your mind is to much on your problems they are like mountains.. get your mind on helping y ourself. making things better. then hurting yourself making it worse....... take care.. I LOVE YOU.... |
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Re: No Right To Judge...
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:28:23 AM AEST
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you can only find so much in religion - instead of finding anything outside - you should concentrate on healing whats inside - i.e yourself and your heart.
You have shown in your poetry that poetry is a great way to vent feelings and emotions- great write! |
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